mulioctaveman (Monday 5th of January 2009 01:14:29 PM)

Support that voice! You have a beautiful tone but I think you could belt this just a powerfully as Natalie if you really put the placement right.

Theater00jock (Friday 4th of July 2008 10:02:10 PM)

someone away. I dunno I just think it needs a little more vivid imagery. but vocally nothing to say. and dont get me wrong the acting was really good.

Theater00jock (Friday 4th of July 2008 10:01:38 PM)

really really really pretty song gorgeous voice and great acting. the only thing I would say is try and really make it personal. I felt like parts of it were being "acted" instead of being lived. What I usually do when I find myself doing that is I write down times I've felt like that. Then take the most vivid one and use it in the song. Either that or maybe if you try to play it a little more like.. like maybe you weren't quiet in other relationships but you tried to change it. like u scared

irae1984 (Friday 27th of June 2008 03:40:31 PM)

It's alright.....;o) You slay me, Taige.

DShines22 (Friday 27th of June 2008 12:21:51 AM)

Okay. Seriously. Go post this publicly. (and then delete this comment so it doesn't look like you're a silly head!) It's great! :)